I wanted to create this poem because I want to create a negative feeling but then add the positivity that over powers the negativity. In the first line "Trapped in Darkness Never Fall Down..." means that when you are very dismal and gloomy you don't want to give up or "fall down." Then as it states, "Don't Think Twice" that is also adding onto when you are gloomy to not think twice about your problems and also overthink, because in any situation that is the wrong thing to do. Then the final line "Hope was Here" means that no matter what, in darkness or in day that there is always hope. That line sort of empowers the whole meaning of this poem no mater what there is always some positive or good things in your life or problem.
I liked your poem because your lines stayed on the right track the whole time. There weren't any parts that didn't make any sense, and I could pretty much see the meaning or message right after reading. Also, your written interpretation was very thorough for readers that might not have understood.
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